http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/ Tue, 16 Feb 2010 14:13:35 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1361 anna Fri, 13 Mar 2009 13:42:10 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1361 Doh, "poem". My keyboard doesn't keep up with me. Doh, “poem”. My keyboard doesn’t keep up with me.

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1360 anna Fri, 13 Mar 2009 13:41:36 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1360 Thank you all, Lucy deserves the praise for a lovely poe. Nibble I think the narrator could be with somehow at the foot of the steps encouraging them to come up with her - that's how I took it anyway. But it's always good to get another viewpoint. Thank you all, Lucy deserves the praise for a lovely poe. Nibble I think the narrator could be with somehow at the foot of the steps encouraging them to come up with her – that’s how I took it anyway. But it’s always good to get another viewpoint.

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1339 pam Wed, 11 Mar 2009 20:57:30 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1339 I love how this elaborates on the already extensive collaboration over at qarrtsiluni. Thanks for your rich meeting of minds! I love how this elaborates on the already extensive collaboration over at qarrtsiluni. Thanks for your rich meeting of minds!

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1310 Nathan H Tue, 10 Mar 2009 06:28:13 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1310 Enchanting and intoxicating. Starting here, I would have gone up with her. Enchanting and intoxicating. Starting here, I would have gone up with her.

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1305 nibblepoems Mon, 09 Mar 2009 19:27:22 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1305 This is a good piece, but I'm afraid that the perspective of the photo places the speaker at the bottom, not the top, thus imploring people to 'come up' seems backward. The words would have fit an image shot down a flight of stairs better. This is a good piece, but I’m afraid that the perspective of the photo places the speaker at the bottom, not the top, thus imploring people to ‘come up’ seems backward. The words would have fit an image shot down a flight of stairs better.

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1245 Michelle Sun, 08 Mar 2009 07:43:00 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1245 Congratulations, Lucy and Anna. Intriguing lines. I love the contrast of the bright font with the dark photograph. Congratulations, Lucy and Anna. Intriguing lines. I love the contrast of the bright font with the dark photograph.

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1200 tammy Fri, 06 Mar 2009 06:10:28 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1200 The story Lucy told reminded me a little bit of Hoffmann's The Sandman. The story Lucy told reminded me a little bit of Hoffmann’s The Sandman.

]]> http://postalpoetry.org/2009/03/04/the-playfair-steps/comment-page-1/#comment-1162 marja-leena Wed, 04 Mar 2009 21:56:23 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=725#comment-1162 Wonderful image and words. The shocking and sad tale immediately changed my initial view to something much darker. Wonderful image and words. The shocking and sad tale immediately changed my initial view to something much darker.

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