Comments on: eviction http://postalpoetry.org/2009/01/23/counter-top/ Tue, 16 Feb 2010 14:13:35 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: renkat http://postalpoetry.org/2009/01/23/counter-top/comment-page-1/#comment-701 renkat Fri, 30 Jan 2009 16:13:58 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=659#comment-701 Thank you both for the kind words. Thank you both for the kind words.

]]> By: Michelle http://postalpoetry.org/2009/01/23/counter-top/comment-page-1/#comment-667 Michelle Sat, 24 Jan 2009 17:32:37 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=659#comment-667 The black and white text is very clever, Ren. "her legs buckling knees slamming" Striking. And: "finally this was how she'd go" The black and white text is very clever, Ren.

“her legs buckling
knees slamming”

Striking.

And:

“finally
this was how she’d go”

]]> By: amy http://postalpoetry.org/2009/01/23/counter-top/comment-page-1/#comment-662 amy Fri, 23 Jan 2009 19:25:57 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=659#comment-662 wow, what a strong image! i love the phrase, "as loose as marbles in a leather pouch." and i like what you did with the two-color text... wow, what a strong image! i love the phrase, “as loose as marbles in a leather pouch.” and i like what you did with the two-color text…

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