Rolling Stones poem

Christine Swint’s second winning submission for our September contest was written in response to Fernando de Sousa’s untitled photo of the Docklands, Melbourne. She thought the guard rail looked like the Rolling Stones’ mouth logo, without the tongue.

Thanks to everyone who entered our September contest. You can find all the winning postcards here. The deadline for our October contest is this Saturday, November 15.

7 comments in “rolling stone’s mouth”

  1. balanced on the edge » postal poetry’s september contest says:


    [...] a link to another photo by Fernando Sousa, accompanied by my words. I called it, “rolling stones mouth,” after the eponymous magazine. Thanks to Dana and Dave, who, by publishing my postal poems, keep me [...]

  2. Julie says:


    Excellent poem! Love the Stones reference, too. He wanted “all of me or nothing” is great. I see a couple of different levels of meaning, too. The obvious sexual meaning but also other levels are at play. Awesome picture, too.

  3. Jo says:


    Ha, really smiling here, huge huge smiles. LOVE THIS!

  4. Michelle says:


    Anything to do with the Rolling Stones and lips goes to the top of my list. Very clever, Christine.

    “My eyes dilate, my lips go green
    My hands are greasy
    She’s a mean, mean machine
    Start it up
    If you start me up
    Give it all you got”
    - Start Me Up, Rolling Stones

  5. deb says:


    These postcards of yours are amazing. I see a chapbook in them, a packet to keep and mail. Or both and all. I do. (I want one, or two.)

  6. christine says:


    Deb, we should tell Fernando your idea. A lot of his photos are visual puns, and he also comes up with clever titles.

  7. Suzanne says:


    Ooooh, oooh, oooh… I hear collaboration in the works. Yummy!

    The Rolling Stones aren’t the only rock-n-roll forces at work here. Sexy, gritty, and a little twisted… Sublime perhaps ;)



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