Comments on: migraine bird

By: dale

dale — Sun, 26 Oct 2008 14:24:08 +0000

Ach! Wonderful.

By: Susan Richardson

Susan Richardson — Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:11:58 +0000

Thank you, Michelle – and for the peony moon post! x

By: Susan Richardson « peony moon

Susan Richardson « peony moon — Sun, 26 Oct 2008 05:38:58 +0000

[...] Have a look at Susan’s striking winning entry. [...]

By: Michelle

Michelle — Sat, 25 Oct 2008 15:20:46 +0000

Wow! Congratulations, Susan.

By: Susan Richardson

Susan Richardson — Sat, 25 Oct 2008 14:44:42 +0000

Thanks to you all for your comments. I’m a poetry postcard novice but definitely have the urge now to create some more!

By: Rethabile

Rethabile — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 19:24:18 +0000

I saw one a while ago. I was walking my tots to school, or back from it. Back from it, I think. And one swooped from a nearby tree and landed on the carcass of a pigeon in the middle of a road, and picked at it with its beak and picked at the red meat. And it looked just like this picture and answered to these words. My kids asked me questions about it all the way home.

By: christine

christine — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 18:33:21 +0000

This poem’s language is evokes incessant cawing and flapping, the need to escape. Wonderful blend of words and image.

By: Jo

Jo — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 17:00:30 +0000

fabulous……..

By: Jean

Jean — Fri, 24 Oct 2008 15:37:21 +0000

Oh! Wonderful. I wish I didn’t know how horribly, evocatively accurate.