Comments on: eated http://postalpoetry.org/2008/09/26/eated/ Tue, 16 Feb 2010 14:13:35 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Bill http://postalpoetry.org/2008/09/26/eated/comment-page-1/#comment-178 Bill Tue, 30 Sep 2008 15:11:52 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=337#comment-178 There was blood on the sidewalk outside the feed store. It looked like there'd been a fight. I asked what the heck? The young man pointed up to a cranny in the steel sheeting overhead where a pigeon was dying from its wounds. There was blood on the sidewalk outside the feed store. It looked like there’d been a fight. I asked what the heck? The young man pointed up to a cranny in the steel sheeting overhead where a pigeon was dying from its wounds.

]]> By: Nathan http://postalpoetry.org/2008/09/26/eated/comment-page-1/#comment-172 Nathan Mon, 29 Sep 2008 09:45:53 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=337#comment-172 Yeah, that last line really makes this. And this is a wonderfully imaginative use of shadow and wings. I like it a lot. Yeah, that last line really makes this. And this is a wonderfully imaginative use of shadow and wings. I like it a lot.

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://postalpoetry.org/2008/09/26/eated/comment-page-1/#comment-170 Linda Jacobs Sun, 28 Sep 2008 11:44:06 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=337#comment-170 Very creative photography! And I love the rhyme with "greeted"! Very creative photography! And I love the rhyme with “greeted”!

]]> By: christine http://postalpoetry.org/2008/09/26/eated/comment-page-1/#comment-167 christine Fri, 26 Sep 2008 21:10:53 +0000 http://postalpoetry.org/?p=337#comment-167 I like that at the pigeon's life was carried on in the form of a photo, and then a poem. And it seems that the narrator could be the hawk! Nice font. I like that at the pigeon’s life was carried on in the form of a photo, and then a poem. And it seems that the narrator could be the hawk!

Nice font.

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