Comments on: clouds http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/ Tue, 16 Feb 2010 14:13:35 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: carolee http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-62 carolee Thu, 28 Aug 2008 05:36:16 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-62 jo -- a haunting and beautiful piece that (and this is important) works without the image, too. wonderful! jo — a haunting and beautiful piece that (and this is important) works without the image, too. wonderful!

]]> By: Jo http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-61 Jo Thu, 21 Aug 2008 12:53:36 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-61 ps thanks everybody else for stopping by but most of all thanks to Dana, and Dave, for starting this fabulous project. ps thanks everybody else for stopping by but most of all thanks to Dana, and Dave, for starting this fabulous project.

]]> By: Jo http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-60 Jo Thu, 21 Aug 2008 12:52:27 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-60 Yes, that's a good edit. Thanks. Yes, that’s a good edit. Thanks.

]]> By: cecilieaux http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-59 cecilieaux Thu, 21 Aug 2008 09:51:44 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-59 Very interesting idea. As to this poem, one (unsolicited) edit: "left them [new line] [omit: like] hands of ... Very interesting idea.

As to this poem, one (unsolicited) edit:

“left them [new line]
[omit: like] hands of …

]]> By: Stephanie http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-56 Stephanie Wed, 20 Aug 2008 23:39:31 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-56 I like the use of the verb "shuttled" here. It's puzzling and lovely. I like the use of the verb “shuttled” here. It’s puzzling and lovely.

]]> By: odessa http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-58 odessa Wed, 20 Aug 2008 04:50:19 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-58 beautiful! image and words. p.s. i'm with rethabile and blythe, my palms are sweating now. beautiful! image and words.

p.s. i’m with rethabile and blythe, my palms are sweating now.

]]> By: postalpoetry http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-57 postalpoetry Wed, 20 Aug 2008 03:30:03 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-57 Note to Blythe et al: Take a peek at the poet-artist matchup center, located at the bottom of the site, where you can find other poets and artists to work with on collaborative submissions. Also, you can check out the attribution, share-alike Creative Commons images over on Flickr by going to Explore -> Creative Commons and then searching for images that have a share-alike license. So don't feel like you have to create the whole piece yourself. No way! We encourage collaboration between poets and artists. In fact, bunches of collaborators can work together on one submission. That’s part of what makes this joint so freaking awesome (if I may say so). xoxo Dana. Note to Blythe et al: Take a peek at the poet-artist matchup center, located at the bottom of the site, where you can find other poets and artists to work with on collaborative submissions.

Also, you can check out the attribution, share-alike Creative Commons images over on Flickr by going to Explore -> Creative Commons and then searching for images that have a share-alike license.

So don’t feel like you have to create the whole piece yourself. No way! We encourage collaboration between poets and artists. In fact, bunches of collaborators can work together on one submission. That’s part of what makes this joint so freaking awesome (if I may say so).

xoxo
Dana.

]]> By: christine http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-55 christine Wed, 20 Aug 2008 01:52:36 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-55 I just read Rethabile and Blythe's comments. First of all, if I can do one, well... you can too. :-) Also, I wrote my words first, then looked for a photo on my computer to match. I just read Rethabile and Blythe’s comments.

First of all, if I can do one, well… you can too. :-)

Also, I wrote my words first, then looked for a photo on my computer to match.

]]> By: christine http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-54 christine Wed, 20 Aug 2008 01:50:51 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-54 They do like like strange sentinels. Your words, and the photo, make them strangely beautiful. I could put up with some freaky wind towers if it meant cleaner air. We could always paint them! They do like like strange sentinels. Your words, and the photo, make them strangely beautiful. I could put up with some freaky wind towers if it meant cleaner air. We could always paint them!

]]> By: blythe http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/18/title-clouds/comment-page-1/#comment-53 blythe Wed, 20 Aug 2008 01:26:58 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=88#comment-53 If Rethabile is scared to try, I am definitely biting my nails. These are just too fabulous. I keep staring at my pictures and I have no words to go with them. If Rethabile is scared to try, I am definitely biting my nails.

These are just too fabulous. I keep staring at my pictures and I have no words to go with them.

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