Comments on: pavement http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/ Tue, 16 Feb 2010 14:13:35 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: odessa http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-24 odessa Wed, 20 Aug 2008 04:44:56 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-24 oh how lovely! you captured the feeling of wanting to "escape" so perfectly. oh how lovely! you captured the feeling of wanting to “escape” so perfectly.

]]> By: Binh! http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-23 Binh! Mon, 18 Aug 2008 08:22:20 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-23 fun idea for a site and for disseminating poetry. big ups! do y'all charge for making actual postcards? that may be a great thing to do to create revenue. i'm certain you'll find poets to order cards with their own works and other people buying; i'd be the first. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qz7vGW2_5c0 fun idea for a site and for disseminating poetry. big ups!

do y’all charge for making actual postcards? that may be a great thing to do to create revenue. i’m certain you’ll find poets to order cards with their own works and other people buying; i’d be the first.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qz7vGW2_5c0

]]> By: Tessa http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-22 Tessa Mon, 18 Aug 2008 07:49:37 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-22 Just what I needed today, thank you! Just what I needed today, thank you!

]]> By: Jade http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-21 Jade Sun, 17 Aug 2008 22:55:15 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-21 sick of one thing, starved for another... oh yeah, the fickle brain, the photo is stunning in its vast isolation. sick of one thing, starved for another…
oh yeah, the fickle brain, the photo is
stunning in its vast isolation.

]]> By: jo http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-20 jo Sun, 17 Aug 2008 07:12:31 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-20 yes, the photograph perfectly compliments the poem. Such a claustrophobic suburban slice and then the offer of travel and escape. I love the contrast of pavement's a promise, the view, impossible. Wonderful. yes, the photograph perfectly compliments the poem. Such a claustrophobic suburban slice and then the offer of travel and escape. I love the contrast of pavement’s a promise, the view, impossible. Wonderful.

]]> By: christina http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-19 christina Sun, 17 Aug 2008 03:28:08 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-19 Nathan, I love that the picture is of a neighborhood that could be anywhere with homes of almost identical sizes and nearly identical color. I think it goes perfectly with the poem. This monotony and repetition most of us face on a daily basis, yet our minds crave change and color and adventure. Nice job. Nathan,

I love that the picture is of a neighborhood that could be anywhere with homes of almost identical sizes and nearly identical color. I think it goes perfectly with the poem. This monotony and repetition most of us face on a daily basis, yet our minds crave change and color and adventure.

Nice job.

]]> By: ...deb http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-18 ...deb Sun, 17 Aug 2008 00:54:44 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-18 I really love this. I am so glad the photo's horizon wasn't adjusted. The slightly skewed angles work with the poem's mood. It illustrates how image and word tweak one another. I really love this. I am so glad the photo’s horizon wasn’t adjusted. The slightly skewed angles work with the poem’s mood. It illustrates how image and word tweak one another.

]]> By: christine http://postalpoetry.org/2008/08/16/title-pavement/comment-page-1/#comment-17 christine Sat, 16 Aug 2008 19:34:39 +0000 http://www.postalpoetry.org/?p=55#comment-17 The words and the image work well together. I like how the lines are written in the sky, allowing for escape over the rooftops. Wonderful, concrete visuals in the poem. Yes, my brain is like this. Great, Nathan! The words and the image work well together. I like how the lines are written in the sky, allowing for escape over the rooftops. Wonderful, concrete visuals in the poem. Yes, my brain is like this. Great, Nathan!

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